This was a good first entry, Barley. I'm glad you decided to give this a go, and hope you had fun! There are a number of good ideas here that I think need to be fleshed out just a bit more, but that is the nature of a one month game jam, especially for solo projects, first time attempts, and when you already have a busy schedule!
Even though the graphics may be a bit barebones, the piercing wolf eyes definitely accomplish their intended goal. Storywise, I feel the demon aspect may be a little underdeveloped; it's a bit disjointed from the rest of the story. That's not to say it's a bad concept either, it just needs a bit more integration.
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