Presentation-wise, I mostly enjoyed this one, but did struggle a bit with the text effects... if it is difficult or distracting to look at, it effectively loses its purpose... flashy effects are best done in small doses to emphasize something very mportant.
The story was decent, but it also left me wishing to explore more of the absurdity of this world, especially with the visuals of the outdoor laundromat... it would be nice to either lean more into that world building, or alternatively, to avoid it and focus more on the two main characters, I believe. I do love the color choices, and the sprite animations do help give this entry its own unique identity.