I enjoyed the read and vibe that the VN gave, I also appreciated the descriptive views as told by the wolf, but maybe the inclusion of a few more commas might be needed such as the phrase "... stood a well guarded by..." either I'm bad at reading, or I thought something else was well guarded. But overall, the short read, the few graphics executed what it needed to express, and I'm left quite satisfied.
OH AND MIGHT I ADD
The presentation, very very well done, from the opening of the VN, to the moving graphics, the choices in fonts and their positioning was really good for lack of better terms