I noticed that with MBIML for sure, sometimes it feels a bit schizophrenic
Also will randomly introduce characters or lore like it expects you already know about it or forgets it didn't establish it earlier, not just the connections between the two games.
Definitely feels like it needs a proofread, especially since it's 99% story scenes and barely any lewd ones
But that's a relatively minor thing, still enjoying both of them a lot, it's not Eternum level but I'd definitely put it up there with cosy cafe/house in the rift/harem hotel as like A+ tier stuff