Very well written. It was rather abstract though, but the writing really elevated the VN, leading to a poetic, dream-like atmosphere. The presentation is... a bit more mixed I think. It was kept intentionally simple, minimalistic even. I think it complements the minimalistic story really well, so one cannot call it flawed. It's just that I prefer VNs with a bit more substance I guess. While I was impressed by the quality of the writing, I didn't really absorb much of the story nor get attached to any of the characters. It's a bit of a standard "boy meets wolf" story, though one as draped in fantasy as one can possibly can be. But don't let my preferences get you down, it really was beautiful and well done.