Some issues that stand out with the formatting:
- Are the double asterisks intentional? A lot of font is **like this**. You're using it to format comma separated sections which is hard to read.
- There is a blank page in the middle of a heading on page 24, the heading then continues on page 25.
The rapid pace of your recent and upcoming in-development releases makes me a little cautious. I've provided general feedback on your Cinder & Crown page, some of which applies to Legacy's Edge too.
I like this conceptually, will check back in the future.