First off I wanna say I liked the novel! There's just a few things that bug me.
Please be warned there are spoilers ahead.
One thing that bugged me was how it made it seem like there was nothing the mc could do about the "star sickness". But there is. Being that the mc is on a super advanced planet it would make sense for them to have antipsychotics like clozapine. These medications are specifically used to stop halucinations. I think adding these medications would be an interesting addition to fighting against whatever the mc is fighting.
Another thing is the fact that everyone is super angry in here. Ever 5 minutes someone pops and starts yelling their brains out. It also makes me question why Kai thought it would be a good idea to take the drink that removes inhibitions. Sounds like a terrible idea to me. Lets just be thankful he didnt kill anyone.
Another thing is that one line that just bugs me. "Do what must be done." I just think you should choose different words. I can only invision emperor palpatine saying it with that wrinkly old face. I just think that because star wars popularized that saying so much that it would be a good idea to come up with something different.
Again tho these are just a few things. I enjoyed the vn!