Super creative idea! I enjoyed the concept and was genuinely unnerved by certain sections. I loved the art of the Grim Reaper. The game did have a lot of eventing bugs/errors and poor grammar, definitely needs playtested. The stock RPGMaker sound effects were really loud, and the consistent use of them was a little grating. I think with some work this game would be really fun, and I felt it was a nice length as well.
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Valid critique, considering this is my first Game Jam. I expected eventing bugs/error as well as poor grammar.
I can fix the use of the stock RPG Maker sound, plenty of resources out there. But for how loud it is, usually if that's the case you can use the option to lower it. But I digress. I'll see if I have enough motivation to iron the kinks out.
Not to post spoilers, but when you first go outside to extinguish the blue fire, when I went back in the house it was still raining while inside the house. After I take a bath, I cannot dry myself off on the towel, it just says it is used for later. There is grammatical errors such as after I lock the windows it says, but room too cold now. I will say, a good resource for sounds that can be used to replace the default RPGMaker sounds, mainly the menu effects, (I should've specified), is freesound.org - - - https://freesound.org/
I don't want to clog up the comments section. But DM me on discord, @dantescrypt_15996, or Dante's Crypt on Toasty's Discord. I'll give you more places where there are grammatical errors if you want to fix them in the future. After the contest, though, so you're still in line with the contest rules.