It is a nice starts, but there are a few things that I would like to see.
Save games slots, Can't seem to start a new game, just continues where you left off last.
Night - needs to be not as dark. Or at least have the light switches have a small light in them so you can find them in the hallways and rooms.
The head jiggling while standing still. Just would like that turned off.
The text, it goes so slowly. Allow me to click to get the full text and skip through.
After you find her in the spare room, and do the deed. It just kind of cuts out. Had to exit the game and go back in, at which point she appears in the room.
Otherwise, I enjoyed what was there, it was fairly short. But the style is getting there. The model is hot.