I think the premise could be interesting, but this was honestly tough to read. To the point of making me a bit confused what was going on a lot of the time - aside from the mess of grammar issues and leftover comments, the writing seems a bit confused over who's perspective it's telling the story from (unless I missed the reporter having the power to read thoughts?) The game's current lack of backgrounds and sound did not help with the disorientation.
Still, knowing you're new to this, it's an achievement to get as much done with this project as you did - especially during the time you had to work on it! If you do more jams, I hope you get the time to fully realize your ideas <3