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Oh yes... oh very much yes....I am not going to lie, I was hooked straight off the beautiful summary. This is a perfect little chapter one set up and introduction, the writing style is so eloquent and poetic in the character and world building but is still relatable in a way that it doesn't make you feel like you're reading Shakespeare or something. It is just a beautiful writing style that makes me feel like you've (author) woven me (reader) directly into the story... sorry haha I don't know if that makes sense i am rambling but 

TL;DR: This is flippin' fantastic, definitely give it a try if you're debating it, and I am very excited to see further development and new chapters :) <3 <3

*side note: I don't know how the music is implemented and layered (I LOVE it, so beautiful and hauntingly perfect) but I did find the rain to be a bit loud and distracting once it started (using headphones) not a big deal, I may be more sensitive but just thought I would note it in case anyone is sound sensitive in the same weird way I am

*side side note: why am i already SO CAPTIVATED by this edgelord already ToT </3

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Thank you so much!  Abel has lived rent free in my head long before I put pen to paper, so I'm really glad the way that I imagined him translates well to this IF format :) I was hesitant about posting this story since it's definitely one of my more angsty/darker projects and I wasn't sure how it would be received, so I'm really glad you enjoyed Chapter One <3

Now that you've pointed that out, I definitely see what you mean about the rain being a bit loud/distracting. I will definitely go back and adjust the volume on that when I make the next update for Chapter Two. 

I'm so glad you like him! Abel is such a fun character to write :)  This comment made me smile so much, I really appreciate your kindness and encouragement! <3