These might just be a lower priority because the hotel is unfinished, but:
Taking the lift down to the lobby says "Melo takes the lift to the second floor".
The narration when getting swallowed by Talash also mentions Melo's pants even though the uniform is just a thong.
After she swallows the other boy, the internal monologue says "It didn't took her long to eat him" rather than "It didn't take her long," and the receptionist afterwards says "Seems like she appreciate you" rather than "appreciates" or "appreciated."