A nicely written unfortunately familiar story. I really dig the presentation and I feel you handled the stuff with Valdislav incredibly well, though I think the ending could've been blended into a little better as right now there feels like there's a bit of a harsh disconnect between Remi spiraling to them being more composed and seeking their friends out, right now it sorta' just happens. Overall it's a pretty efficiently and effectively told story, well done.
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also wanted to add that Remi struggling with the personal pronoun “I” when talking to themself was just such an effective way to show their disconnect to themself and is a manifestation of feeling disconnected to one’s self/body that I don’t often see utilised despite experiencing it myself. I really like it!
Practically everything in this story is pulled from my own experiences, so it's been 'nice' with lack of a better word that there's been quite a few people who recognise themselves in details like this. Makes me feel less alone in it, and it was my hope while making the game it'd do the same for others by showing struggles I know can be very hard to talk about <3