Your game is very good, both the story and the cutscenes. I'm Brazilian and I would appreciate it if you could translate it into Portuguese. I would also like to make a suggestion: you can buy an alcoholic drink and give it to Alice, that way she will get excited and it will be easier to seduce her. And also add an option to steal something from Clarie's drawer and blackmail her in exchange for sex. You could also add an option so that, after giving the book to the demon in the cemetery, the character gains some paranormal powers, like becoming invisible to spy in the shower or some other power that allows him to get rid of the church guard. Excuse my mistakes in English, I know very little.
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I know this is from 2 months ago but just wanted to say, I liked the alcohol idea he gave, but if you do end up doing anything involving blackmail or other ways of forcing someone to give you sexual favours against their will, PLEASE make it optional or not there at all. That kind of thing completely ruins any character route for me. Eager consent is sexy😂 I'm not a kinkshamer tho I am not against it being optional but I really hate games that railroad you into being a selfish asshole of an MC and then act as if it was a choice the player made