( spoilers? ) if I have to be honest.. I was more confused about this game more than anything.. Know don't get me wrong.. I can see where you was going with this..like for example.. I like the main menu... And By press start you see a play CutSense start at the beginning.. Where seems this character where we play it.. Where seems we just got back to work.. Anyways this character seems to be tired.. And seem looking at something in the computer.. Then they go back to sleep.. But Before they do that.. Suddenly a stranger error appears what no where.. And teleport portal.. Appear at computer.. Just to make the player go inside the portal.. Teleport in the video game.. In the Game game.. ( get it? ).. Anyaway.. After CutSense is done.. What Seem like look like rpg.. Which not going to lie.. It Dose look nice.. And seem like we play a female black skin.. Name is coriander.. And honestly.. So far the game pretty okay.. Straight forward.. I mean.. Yeah.. The game could be better.. But so far the CutSense.. And work the game.. Seems to be okay to me.. However that where my positive end it.. Because after that.. I have the opposite positive about this game.. more than anything...first problem is.. The CutSene feels like forced than anything.. Like when I was walk up to 3 these girls..which they name is saffron.. Papper.. And Shichimi( I also like these art too.. But The event.. Seem forced me to walk up these 3..and is very noticeable..and I don't like that.. You should add block where if player touch it.. The CutSense will play.. Not only make the CutSense.. Less forced ...but also feel fun this way.. And Polish.. Freedom too.. Because it feels like you choose to make this CutSense to happen.. Not the game self.. Which make it a lot better.. And Polish.. Than the game doing self for you .. Then CutSense play 3 girls.. What seem they talk about escaping this placeThen give us tasks where we have to kill ( this weird ass giltch enemies?).. With easy way possible.. By pressing space.. And honestly.. This feels.. Too easy... But more on that late it... Anyway.. The characters will start to ask they self.. Was that supposed to happen?... Then you can move around the place.. And before I talk other CutSense.. There others problem I find about this games.. Kinda?.is more like what you did that on purpose or not?.what I mean by that.. Is there gdevelop picture Around the ground.. After you kill ( literally the only enemies who can kill you ) know.. I don't know if you did add that on purpose.. Just to make the game look like is glitching out.. Or something like that....or this is just bug where.. A gilltch picture just won't loud.( fun fact that kinda happened to me too.. On Sans spite in kill sans game..]What is kill sans you might ask?.. OH IS GAME I BEING LOSING MY MIND MAKE IT IN DAY 3 ALL BY MYSELF FOR THIS GAME JAM.. and I have fun.. Totally didn't feel the pain at all.. :).. Also you can play it in Submitted in the 7 game jam self .. "Wink Wink") Anyway.. If the picture gitch is bugging.. You should probably try to fix it.. By probably replacing new one instead ( know i am not exactly super sure how to fix it that problem.. But I just give you a feedback that might you help in the end) ]And if you did that ..on purpose?..Well..all I have to say is.. The glitch would look better than GDevelop picture instead .. if I have to be honest .. Anyways.. If you find the 3 girls ( by looking around place you're self ) You see they still talking about escaping this place.. But weird things start to happen to them.. They start to giltch.. And then.. They get deleted.. And left you.. And then.. Everything start to delete.. And if time run out.. Is game over.. At least kinda?.. Because honestlyk couldn't find a way to actually avoid getting kill this part.. Plus there no check points this game have.. So.. Trying to figure out how to survive this part game.. Mean While rest start every time I die.. Is annoying more than anything ( So unless I mess something.. I don't think there a way to not getting killing this part.. Seem like you supposed to die.. But if this is the case.. I feel like it should say bad ending 1/1...to let me know that supposed to happen. .. Except me just guess?.. And add 1/1 ending to let me know that all the game have to offer.. And it supports to happened ( but if you planning or there more ending than.. Than more numbers one.. And add check points would be nice.. Try to make it the ending not hard to find.. Otherwise player might rage out of the game ).. Really.. The game need check point.. and make the CutSense more Polish.. And the game play.. And honestly the game would be better if was rpg.. Instead.. Kinda horror games kinda way?... Plus would be better if the first enemies was boss fight..and make it rgp fight kinda.. Instead lame way possible.. And more ending would be nice.. And add enemies.. And Would be Nice if water can move.. Anyway the game Dosen't have to be special.. Just need more polish and time and effort.. To make game to great.. ( and also let me read the CutSense.. And let me press space to go next page.. Not the game self ) Then update the game version..And if you can't do it yourself.. By Is better to team up with someone.. Than doing all yourself.. To make it easier for you ( sorry for being late the party.. I was didn't have time to do that.. Since I had to study and go the test.. 5 time in Role.. Make it hard to play test and give you a feedback at the same time.. And after I done the test.. I did take a break.. And play your game.. But then I forgot about to give you a feedback.. After I was Focus my game.. Sorry.. But in eventually I remember it.. I hope this feedback helps.. Even if i was later the party : )
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RAHHHH thank you for the feedback good sir! yeah I agree with so much of what you are saying. The cut scene with the 3 girls was going to come later in the game after killing some enemies and exploring a bit. Coriander was going to be much more hidden during the convo but just like the shitty ending I unfortunately ran out of time lol. The boss fight I wanted to seem very easy with just pressing the space button so it got that overpowered feel to it,. Coriander is so overpowered that she broke the game and thats why the gdevelop icons showed up and some things looked off. The ending was going to go wayyy different but I ran out of time so I made it so you die with the game, I defiantly should have been more clear with that instead of putting 'game over' at the end, its a bit misleading. Sorry you had to go through all the cut scenes again. Yes making the cut scenes slower, good point I need to do that. And it definitely needed a lot more polishing for sure. Thank you very much for the feedback! It will help me improve my dev skills and is every appreciated!