Post by bruce9324 in Damn That's Felicia? comments

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I hope this helps like feedback:
I like the game and I really want to know more about Felicia's story but... I have some troubles with the recent chapters:

1) The chapters feel unconnected, it's like every chapter are self-conclusive when the idea (At least I feel it like that) should be continue one unique story chapter after chapter.

2) I like the new characters (Especially Felilia's design) but the story is about FELICIA, not other characters, I think it's better save them for other games like spin off or make them appear in the background but not let them stole the protagonism to Felicia.

3) The idea of the game in the begining I thought the game was NTR but the game is NTS in every moment and I don't dislike the story but, I think the game need a really more definited NTR path separated of the NTS I mean, the MC NEVER must know what is Felicia doing, the name of the game says it all, "Damn that's Felicia" in plan "I don't think that she is" like any classic NTR where the MC watch a censored image of his girlfriend/mother/wife/sister/Childhood friend/etc, and he can't believe that is his girl until the end where she can't come back to her old life after be too much corrupted.

The solution to all this I porpose is:
1) Rework a little the story to conect better the chapters.
2) In the next chapter and from it all the story must spin around Felicia and ONLY felicia, with some characters having a really little and short participation to not make this all only with Felicia and the MC.
3) Rework the game very much than a little to make more clear the NTR path.

Trriggered Bakery198 days ago

hi! first of all thank you for this feedback, i really like it when they're big no diddy

1.i understand why you feel that way and i kinda agree but I promise, these chapters are all made with the bigger picture in mind

2. I think that just comes down to personal preference,i think of it like "naruto" yeah it's about him not every chapter has him in it, it's hard to show all of felicia if you're only getting her pov

3.honestly that's on me, i mention this a lot but the beginning code had this glitch where the text kept going all the way to the top after every choice, plus i didn't know about timers yet, overall it was a mess so I kinda rushed the porn part lol

good news is, next game is going to have more scenes i've been wanting to do!

bruce9324198 days ago(+1)

Thanks for the reply.

1) I know you have a big plan in mind for the game (I know other dev of a game like this who say something similar xD ) I only hope in the future the game be more conected.

2) I understand what you mean but again, this game is about Felicia, we are here to watch her in all the porn scenes, if you want a better example that what I mean, you can watch "A promice best Left Unkept" from Hangover cat, in his game the story is around the MC and her girlfriend and even if there are other girl, she almost have scenes because the dev save her for other game (A "DLC" called "A Promise Best Left Unkept: Aya" to be specific) so I sugest use this game to "present" the other characters, give them some scenes if is necesary and after move them to other projects to concentrate the atention in Felicia.
And I know that like I said before, need more characters than the MC and the FMC (Felicia) but, one thing is need them, and other is let them the protagonism for one entire chapter with almost none aparition or mention of Felicia.

3) I think it's not your fault but the program's, the program that you use to make the game it's very complicated (Well, all are the same in one form or other xD ) but I hope you can fix it in a close future because the idea of the game (if I understand it right) it's make a NTR (NetoraRe) story about Felicia cheating in the MC at MC's back so if he know what is happenign and it's agree with it that is a NTS or NTRS (NetoraSe) story and I think not all the fans are here for a NTS story (I know there are people that enjoy the NTS but isn't my kink)

And now I will add a 4th commentary more that I forgot in the main commentary:
4) I hope in the future versions you can make this text fount an option and not the only one style of text in the game, it's very dificult to read the chat in the game with it (Without ofend you of course)

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