This is a clever little montage of vignettes that sketch the development of a relationship. I think the prose is the highlight of this piece. The writing is minimalistic, but the writer clearly understands the appeal of good cadence in a conversation. I would be thoroughly entertained just listening to this author write about random stuff in the park. The whole thing is surprisingly easy to follow. The non-linearity starts out strong, but the ends leave me questioning if the out-of-orderness of the latter half really served the narrative. The jam theme is pretty subtle in this one, more so on a metaphorical level than anything visually, which is fine.
Overall I thoroughly enjoyed this.