Played it and it actually sounds good!! The game dialogue isn't rigid for a demo and the characters are intriguing, especially Mike, its silly but I found it cute when there is a chance to romance him, along with Zander. If you continued this and need some help with the writing, I would love to help you with the writing because it actually is good novel format!!
I'd say it's more explicit with the dialogue scenes!! I just noticed more oddities but I think I would rather say it in a dm or so ! (my discord is r_c1980) but other main things are very cool if you ask me, though I do think there should be more built up transition between the romancing of the characters, i.e: more options to say yes or no if we as the MC would continue since it is a little abrupt from the way we're already close to them and maybe add more more character designs for the scenes for Zander and Mike!! Otherwise, all of this is pretty functional and pretty great with the atmosphere!
:0 yes I think I got a little to excited and wanted to get all my favorite scene out of the way and choice branches are super hard for me ngl lol but I think I have gotten the hang of it better atleast a little lol. I'll try and work on that oh and I have been working on more designs for mike and zander cause it looks kinda sad with them just standing there blank face while their talking lmao. Thank you