A mistake i believe to have noticed is the line "he thrusts as rough and as fast as he can't with each word he says" instead of "as fast as he can"
Also the option to "lick the cum off his face and make your with him" insteaed of "make out with him"
Not sure what's wrong with this one. Could you clarify?
I think the sentence "Make your with him" makes no sense in this context. It should rather be "Make out with him"
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