Thanks for the feedback, but no need to get furious. I feel like I accomplished what I set out to do with the project. The lore is entirely my own - I enjoy writing, which is what drew me to making games (and movies) in the first place.
When you say it's poorly optimized, did you experience any specific issues like lag or stuttering? I used a number of optimization techniques in Unity to keep performance smooth, so I’d appreciate any details.