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This was a very charming submission!  I really, really loved the worldbuilding in this, it was well-handled without beating us over the head with itself.  The interpersonal dynamics were varied and fun and the characters each had their own unique voice.

Theme: I felt like it was an optimistic look at a kind of bleak start that resonated with the Light In The Dark theme.  The whole cycle of rebirth that was present throughout felt good.

Story: An excellent imbalanced romance, with a satisfying conclusion!  You were able to play with some power imbalance clichés without making it feel icky and it was handled well.

Presentation: The drama of some of the scenes could have benefited from some CGs but, since this was a Jam entry, I'm not knocking any points off for that.  (And I do realize the irony of me specifically saying "this could have had more art in it" lol)  Other than that, there were some minor grammatical errors that I found but did not disrupt the story or feel.

Creativity: I really loved this take on Famine and harvest and stuff, I adored the pantheon that was created here and I especially applaud your restraint in not answering all of the possible questions about it!  It felt like a sample of an existing world without feeling like we're missing anything just by consuming this Jam entry.


Really great work, thanks for submitting!!  I really loved this one.