A quick read with an interesting concept! I was very intrigued. With the compactness of the story I think it did a good job establishing the key elements, the atmosphere of an cozy cafe was nicely described and the dialogue was sharp and gave me a decent understanding of the characters. I honestly feel like it could be expanded into a full story! There's definitely some unanswered questions regarding their (very long) lives, the nature of the world, etc, and this is a tiny glimpse into it. I enjoyed reading it though!
Thanks for making this! I hope you do more writing in the future!