Hello Zeal, I want to be honest, I didn't fully like the game, I can see potential, it's a good start, but I'd like to give some friendly advice:
- The overall animation of the NPCs can throw you off a bit, when drinking coffee, walking, I think I know what you wanted to do, to make the city feel alive and give that PSX vibe, but sometimes less is more in this kind of stuff.
- The coffee shop mechanics are a bit meh. Again, you don't need to always have a minigame in this kind of horror games but if you do, try to give it some more meaning, conversations with the customers, different types of drinks, having to actually take the money from them when Sarah's not there.
- I love that you include voice actors in the game, I get that you can't have every character voiced, but it would be great to have it constantly, what I mean is, if you have the protagonists voiced, every line should be voiced, that's my honest opinion.
I don't mean to be harsh, I think that you have potential but I wanted to give some advice as someone who knows a bit, just a bit, about game development and voice acting. I think you can make great games if you try to improve some details.
Keep up the good work. I'll keep an eye on your future releases and probably buy and try them.
PS: Loved the Max Payne styled comic slides ;D