Well written and excellent atmosphere. I think I can't judge with the tools I have, but I least I can said how you can improve it, or at least to my eyes.
You can refine the key to skip and accelerate the dialogue, maybe to a touch key. So everything in the game has the same configuration and some text are hardly readble, so that can be improve to. Overall is a nice experience... Agree that I'm indeed a terrible leader, king or God all at the same time.