+nice art and pace
- choices dont do shit, honnestly more interested in some of the other slave that were shown, forced cuck route
hope in the future you can buy one of the other slaves as a sub plot at least
Nah, ignore this guy. Your game is perfect as it is, give total focus on the muscle girl, she is hot! If you want to had another girl, consider the third one, and as an addiction to the story. The only thing I wanted to change (if you want it ofc) is increase the boy dick, not as big as is dad, but at least big, so the girl can enjoy it more.