I really like the Erymanthian Boar Ooze, such a cool monster! Here is my feedback
+ Clear and readable layout, things delineated and sectioned clearly!
+ Great guidance on how to run the monster and how it works in a warden-focused, gameable way.
- Adding some concrete mechanical bonuses to the cargo transport suit would be nice; there are a few ways it can be interpreted currently.
- Cryosleepers probably don't need to be mentioned as NPCs directly since they aren't characters per se.
- Location descriptions are a bit verbose; some trimming and editing will make them easier to parse.
- The map is slightly hard to read with the transparent effects; a simpler rendering of the map would make things a bit clearer.