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I already wrote a review last night but had to come back here after replaying and picking different choices.

I LOVE the difference in the choice of words and phrases used in the description of the scene where MC is in the bathroom depending on the choice you pick before MC takes a shower. The way the tone of the scene changes depending on the choice you make had me analysing this thing as if I had an assignment on it lol. 

SPOILER AHEAD (kinda?)

The different bmg, the description of the smell of his clothes being somewhat negative in one and almost poetic in the other, how big his clothes are compared to MC making him seem threatening in one and just a bigger guy in the other...It almost made the room seem darker in one and brighter in the other. 

Maybe that's just the former literary student in me but I just really wanted to show appreciation for such details because you really didn't have to make this scene seem so different yet you did and it shows that this game was/is made with care and I love it. <3

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Oh my gosh, I rarely respond to comments on the game page (since it can get overwhelming quickly for me haha) but let me tell you I got so excited when reading your comment!! People have pointed out the change in tone depending on which route you chose but to have it dissected exactly where I intended with the description of the smell and the reminder of his height means a lot to me! Even MC's reaction to the cold shower was intentional!

I really wanted the following interaction between Mychael and MC in the following scene in the kitchen to be believable, hence why their thoughts are so different (aptly named Cautious and Carefree branches). Thank you so much, that made my night <3!

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Aww I'm really glad that my comment seemed to have made you happy! :D

I just really had to point it out because I had spent way too much time geeking out about this scene haha (I really could've gone on and on about how in one scene the emphasis is really put on the fact that this is not MC's place but HIS and on the other it's not MC's place but it is shared with them, but I didn't want my comment to be too long lol). The game is so well written and has made its way into one of my favorites. I'm very excited to see more! Wishing you the best. <3