I really enjoyed the demo and am looking forward to the full game when it comes out. As a HUGE fan of corruption stories, I’m hoping for a certain direction in the story, but we’ll see what you have in mind. Good looking characters and interesting premise. This has the potential to be a great story! I do have a couple suggestions you may want to consider -
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The dialogue types out very slow. Personally, I prefer my text to be displayed instantly, but I think you should at least put a slider here for the player the control text speed.
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The characters sometimes appear before their clothes do - in such that the character will appear nude than a second later the clothes layer will superimpose over it. Not a big deal - but it can break the immersion a bit.
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I appreciate the effort in the mini-game with the rune matching, but for me it doesn’t do much and can feel like it’s slowing down the story progress. My suggestion is to make it an option to skip this (or add variety perhaps).
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The game overall can lag a bit - not sure if it’s my system with the game (I have a fair-to-middling setup currently), but you may want to just take a look at that.
Again these, are just suggestions so take from them what you want. Overall I really enjoyed the experience and will be playing this when it comes out for sure.