This is a very fun little trifold with some really good stuff inside. Here is my feedback:
+ Presentation is very thematic and diagetic,
+ formatting and layout are great, it is really well put together!
+ Good variety of weapons, equipment and enemies on display!
- I personally would struggle to immediately put this to use; the weapons and equipment certainly could be used right away, but I feel like to use the implied setting within here I would need to put a bit more work to make something I can run, this isn't a bad thing by the way, just an observation.
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Thank you for the feedback! I had similar thoughts about usability as far as the theme and implied setting went and struggled a bit balancing how much I wanted to explain versus how much immediately usable content I wanted to pack in. I ended up trying to lean more towards the latter in an attempt to make the pamphlet a bit more generally useful versus only useful if you're running an underground metro style setting, but I definitely think a better balance could have been struck in retrospect.