There's some interesting writing in some of the text between scenes, when there is just a black background. Have you ever played Lessons in Love perchance?
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You’re right—the technique of using black-screen text for internal monologues was indeed inspired by works like Lessons in Love . I love how it immerses players in the protagonist’s thoughts. You might spot other familiar techniques too… You know how it goes: you’re writing, and suddenly realize you’ve ‘reinvented the wheel’ (￢‿￢ ). But isn’t that the essence of creativity—drawing inspiration, reinterpreting, and making something your own? I hope I’ve succeeded