Congrats on making your first full game!
I really like the setting and the overall atmosphere of desperation. At the end, I had to stop and think about whether I'd talk to Red before leaving or not (I left him... and I feel bad about it, but I didn't want to risk getting stuck there.)
I played part-way through another run to see what else might happen, and it seems there's some nice breadth to the things that can happen.
The reviews were a really nice touch, too.
Nice work!