This is quite good so far. I can already tell that this is going to be a rough ride. A very solid foundation that already has me feeling emotional. I only wish that our character had more options to be standoffish. I feel like the character caves way too easily. He was basically abandoned and ignored by the person who was his entire world for years. I was kind of looking forward to giving the brother a hard time. I thought we would be able to reject him trying to bond with us. Like you just cast the mc aside and now were all buddy buddy? I think not! Anyway, beautiful start!
That's totally understandable. I am always amazed by interactive stories. I play a lot of text only interactive fiction games and see how a great deal of time and effort goes into making them. Then there is your game that has visuals and audio as well. I bet it is very time consuming for you. Also, my thing about the mc giving in so easily is just more of a personal preference that I have with any story. BUT I just wanted to say that you are doing an amazing job!👍