At the beginning, I was getting this very cheap effort vibe from the novel, with all the misspelling and weird everything, but I gotta say that the characters each came into their roles, and I ended up enjoying this quite a bit. I feel like I was watching the dev start out with a goofy project but really hone in on writing and the plot. The animations were solid, the ones we did get.
My biggest criticism is the adult scenes. They're usually pretty short and only one or two positions, and I don't think they're transitioned well. It's really abrupt when it happens and when it ends.
I plan to come back, cause I'm really into the plot now, but I would love to see a bit more polish too.