First, thank you for commenting. It really makes my day! Second, I’m glad that you noticed your wrongs. Ignorance can be bliss but sometimes people really don’t see what they’re doing wrong until it’s clear in their face. I went through this as well. Seeing as I didn’t know anyone who didn’t think differently from the people around me.So, without knowing it, I was possibly hurting a lot of others around me. Sadly, I always seem to remember these things. Which is a bummer when I know I changed, but I feel like I cannot let it go.
Anyway, most of my poems are usually like yours. But more dark , twisted and maybe fantasy like. It was fun to try something like this. Cause I’m one for trying out most things. So, when I have time...I would definitely try out your submission . Again thank you