The concept of this story at the start reminded me of TheSunVanished (A Twitter ARG that started a few years back). The story so far isn't much in terms of length, but I feel it's off to a great start. I like how there's two distinct paths at the start, really cool. IDK if it's just for "aura points", but I like how MC's eyes glow in the dark similar to them (maybe got affected by the meteorites in some way?)
In any case, the story is pretty cool. I hope your project becomes even more successful.