This was fantastic! Love me some feminization deification torture basement. I found this through 'The Goddess and her Dog' and I'm really glad I sought out the original.
I absolutely love Athame - she's just the right balance of unhinged but vindicated. I really loved your ending for Act 4, Luci is such a great protagonist.
Also, as someone who loves the concept of Author's using coloured text, I adored Arc III, chapter 24 and 25.
Hoping for more, but I'd still be pretty happy with just what we've seen so far. Cheers!