Thank you for putting together a great game. The background stories are actually interesting and the gameplay is compelling.
Each personality is sufficiently different for them to “feel” like a different kind of challenge. This is a nice touch. In particular, the idea of not satisfying a “spoilt” and “entitled” attitude leads into Felicity’s storyline really nicely. Felicity and Emma’s relationship has some dark nuances, their jealousy being the root of which, and that feels like they could develop further and I would like to see Emma enter the dungeon as much as I’d like to see options for the two of them being sidelined or being simultaneously engaged; a good variety of sandwiches could be developed with these two.
Aurora’s storyline, a slow corruption wherein she starts to succumb to lust, is obviously in its primacy yet it is an interesting alternative to all the other stories because it’s a fall from innocence. In contrast, all the other characters have character traits that align them with mischief or else they have been broken or tainted by prior experiences.
Another point: Maria’s character really starts to spill out towards the end of your work and we see her increasingly imposing her fantasies upon others. During this latter period of her storyline there are moments where it’s possible to “step in” and possibly interject. I felt that this was a nice touch.
Having alternative options when there are multiple characters is fun. The Emma, Felicity, Ashley has a couple of these moments where you can end the scene on one or the other character. It doesn’t seem to alter the storyline (correct me if I’m wrong) but simply having options is nice.
Some of the longer scenes were difficult to read all the way through. Notably, Ashley’s story has one lengthy monologue about her past. Honestly, I felt that was too long and even after two playthroughs I could make it.
It’s been said before that the guy’s are all pretty ugly, it’s sad to see my hair is thinning when I watch TV :D
Love the dungeon BUT found that sometimes the behaviour in the dungeon was in stark contrast to the behaviour I could expect from the same characters outside of the dungeon. That was a bit weird or the distance between realities was too far and the storyline started to seem weird or disjointed.
Would also like to see the dungeon opening up for all visitors in future versions of the game.
It would also be nice to get some darker skin tones in there too.
As everyone has said, its an incredible story. Thanks :)