Good to meet you. First of all, I'm new to this and I just finished playing, although I still have a bit to go, but I'm still making progress, so I'm enjoying this VN. First of all, this visual novel started off pretty well, in my opinion, and it would start on vacation. Something very interesting, and like any vacation, you think about having a good relationship on the beach.
The characters: Without a doubt, I find it interesting. It's quite interesting to see that many girls, but the men, wow, it's wonderful to see the characters, especially those two big dogs... they just caught my attention even more. It could definitely be one of my favorites.
Story: I'd have to wait on this one since I couldn't give an opinion because I prefer this VN to be finished. So, I could say that this VN has the potential to be good, both in terms of the plot, the characters, and everything else. Even so, you're doing an excellent job. Keep it up.
Critique: I'm not really one to criticize anything bad about VNs, even though when I play other VNs, I don't see anything wrong with it. I don't like to give bad opinions or anything. What interests me most is the story, as part of me as a writer, comes from "Wattpad," a community of writers who write stories. And well, not to change the subject, I'm more focused on the story and how the story will develop. I like to read, and that aside from the characters, that's another point I won't mention. I just like the characters in each VN.
Improvements: I don't think I know when you started this VN project, but I know there will be a time as long as you keep updating and everything. Over time, you'll be able to improve certain things that you'll be updating.