i really liked the story, seemed well thought out. during the entire game i only saw one typo so it's made very well. i wish it had more diverse girls though, thats the main thing that bothered me. the ending also felt very abrupt in 0.8. i wasnt expecting it to end there. also was a bit creepier than expected. i hate horror and scary stuff. i appreciate how long the story is. very immersive.