sCREAMS- thank you so much!!! oh gosh, 10k??? well in positive news! i am working on a chrome centric visual novel ( and asha and farah will feature there too tehe ) that will offer hopefully an actual 10k+ length story heheh and yes! i love narrative writing style - it's like my default, i couldn't let it go!!! so i'm glad you liked how i wrote things <3