i really liked this. for some reason this reminded me of the early days of eternum. very high potential here. a couple points i think can be improved. sometimes the dialogue goes on and on when it's not needed.like the bickering between the li's. sometimes it's really funny and other times it goes on and on and on lol :) some of the sex scenes were good. and some were really bad. the difference is huge. massive potential for improvements especially the climax. looked really unnatural sometimes.and some of the scenes were really short. i'm praying this improves alot in the future. best of luck in development @NoGlory