Love how groovy this is, chugging along in the snow with a mostly-upbeat-but-sometimes-mysterious attitude. I think putting in another section that brings the energy down just a little bit (like subbing out the lead for a floaty pluck or taking out the drums for a few bars) could help break it up some more and keep that energy staying as fresh as possible. That's by no means a rule or anything, just an idea of something to mess around with because everything here is very cool! It's a very fun submission great work! :)
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ty! and I remember going over this decision too; mix it up for a more dynamic piece? have the same textures and dynamics all the way bc so much of a trek thru a snowstorm is featureless, exhausting; one mile looks and feels like the next one which looks and feels like the last one? the most tempting change, even beyond instruments and textures, was doing a metric modulation, which I ultimately didn't; I just couldn't! this artwork felt like it had to have smth really steady; the skier feels absolutely determined to keep the pace