This was outstanding!!!! Like another commenter mentioned, I loved how everything began with metaphor and then transitioned into literal. At first I wasn't super sure where this was going, until we got to the wildlife tips area and I was completely hooked in and couldn't stop. The prose itself is so perfectly gross to chew on, and the perspective of the main character is so human. I loved the anger, I loved how the changes in the text by clicking on it seemed to reveal not only more information, but sometimes more of how she actually feels behind the first words she says.
My only note would be this would be a masterpiece if there was some atmospheric music to help prop the story up in our faces even more. The quiet dread this story captured could make my hair stand on end with a boost in atmosphere like that.
One of the best interactive fiction stories I've ever read, and I can't wait to read/play more of what you make!