This AVN is reasonably good. A few grammar errors due to English being the authors second language but its tolerable.
It has a reasonably good story, fairly original in terms of AVNs. Not many real choices though, just the usual relationship point stuff that may one day lead to lewds. Not at the moment though, I only saw like 2 lewds and those didnt seem to be optional.
I liked the girls for the most part although there was an overabundance of black-haired girls. Only one exception that I could see.
For the time being I give this one a 3 out of 5. Good effort but needs to work on that English and I would like to see more choices, preferably meaningful story choices.