Yo.
I think it's a game with a really good atmosphere. The music and the interface immerse you directly in the vibe. Although it's really too short.
I like:
-I really like the idea of the title screen buttons. I played with them for 2 minutes to study them. XD
-Love the music
-The interface colors are really in keeping with the theme.
-Very natural and relaxing writing.
-The attempt to transcribe Jamaican Creole.
Like Less:
-"Bombaclat". I don't know if in Jamaica they use it as a colloquial expression, but where I come from, it's very hot to say that. Be careful who you say it to. XD. It's something like an extremely offensive insult that will get you a cutlass blow. ^_^;;;;;;;
-Very abrupt musical transition.
-Games really too short.
-Only one choice. The advantage is that it's a real choice that creates a truly different scene. But it's still just one choice.
Final point:
You've nailed your atmosphere. Your game has a lot of character and a real identity. But unfortunately, it's really too short. It's a good thing there's at least one choice, otherwise it wouldn't really be a game. At this point, we don't know what to do or where the story will take us. We can imagine some concepts, but that's it. It's sad, given how easily we're immersed in your world.
This is a project that lacks content but promises something good. Thank you for proposing it and for working on it. Looking forward to the next installment, I wish you all the best.