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i created this

name:Himari Sakura

age:ass old as the diamond in her chest

Occupation:The demon queen of diamons

     when people go in to her caverns and die she brings them back to life but thay can not leve the caverns in witch she Romes the people loos all memory of Thar past life and until they serve the queen for so long they do not git thos memorizes back. her favorit of her disciples git speshel ear rings in wich she self  wares to know whar they are and what they are doing.

as old as the diamond in her chest i cant buleve it ato curected that to that wored

i'm so sorry guys.:-(

Can I detail this writing a bit?

When the lost souls of the dead wander into her lusterous cavern, she revives them as gem versions of themselves. The living stones cannot leave the cave in which they will forever roam. All wandering souls lose their memories and idea of the lives they led before, slowly, until they have served the Queen for long enough to mindlessly work without any idea of what is happening around them or what they just did. There is no way for the gem-souls to regain their memories. The Queen's favorite dispicles recieve earrings crafted by the Queen herself. The earrings give back the person's idea of who they were. She is as old as the first splinter of diamond to form.

She is the Demon Queen of Gems.

i love it

All I did was put some more detail & spelling in your writing, credit yourself for it.

i know but i cold never right sum thing like this im not vary good at it

I just paraphrased your work, it's only "better" because of how I wrote it.