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whenever someone replies, I will pick the one I like best and continue the story.

You spot her sleeping, curled into herself on rounded stones, lining a starry river reflecting the painted night sky. A murky, sickly sweet aroma drifts from the lazy river. The rocks have a slight green wash where the gurgling water had hit many times, lapping water trying to reach up. The stones are shiny, washed with slimy water with snail shells littering the edge of the water, some slowly creeping along and others stuck, in death. A rustle hits your senses from behind, and you can barely make out the shape of a stray squirrel in the starlight.Her face tells the story of the dreams playing in her head. From what you observe, you think she is having a nightmare. You watch her writhe and whimper, as the light of the pale cornflower moon reflects off an identical, shining mark on her forehead. She appears to be slipping into the murky blue. Her tusks shine. Her face screws. 

What

 do 

you 

do?

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Star:shakes the girl awake*Ma'am are you k?Hello?


(this is star)

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"Huh? What? WAHH!"

She promptly falls off the rock, onto the unruly grass. That looks like it cushioned her fall...?

"Um, I'm so sorry... Oh! I was about to fall off again... The last time that happened I floated down into a village of humans...They chased me out. No harm done, but it was rude... and unnecessary..."

"I'm Draumur, by the way. That means dream. Mostly because I can't keep my head out of the clouds..."

And you are...?

"I'm Star!I am the trickster of stars"

"O-oh... that's a pretty name! If you don't mind me asking..."

Draumur gets up, brushing the bits of dead grass off of her legs.

"Can you at least point me in the direction home? I have no idea where my village is, and from what I've heard, i-it's nowhere near here..."

It looks like there are tears welling in the corners of her eyes. When they start to roll down her cheeks, the color is that of the sky at noon, and the consistency is something like honey.

"Snnff... So... what do y-you say? Will you help me back home?"

i dont know why but your narrating/story telling reminds me of warrior cats......

T^T i am suspicous...

I'm just a blind fanboy, you're right about the writing style haha

"*le giggles* Of course!"

"O-oh! Thank you! Thank you so much!"

She points her finger straight upward, to any number of star clusters.

"I lived up there. Now, l-let's go!"

She sprints over to the dense woods, barely illuminated by the starlight. As you follow quickly in her footsteps, you see her nimbly scale a taller, violet pine.

"I-I'm not sure that's safe!"

*summons a cloud and rides up to her*

"W-woah... I've never ridden on a cloud like this before... We'll be there in no time if we keep u-up at this speed!"

She looks at you, happy tears welling in the folds of her eyes.

"Hey... Thanks. I-I'm sure I could,comvince my village to let you stay a little while,

You can read the gratidtude off her face.

It makes your day.


Thank you for keeping up the story!!! I loved your ideas, and how they fit into the story so nicely! Have a great day, and remember you helped a lemon boy write a story!

The lemon boy himself,

-lemonn

you are so good at telling stories

Aww, thanks!

stack Jenga blocks on her head

She continues to slip, and promptly falls onto the sharper rocks in the river, and doesn't get up. A a creamy pale purple liquid starts to seep from her head. Try again, and save her? If you don't she is going to die, and you will lose all your beloved Jenga blocks.

save her

I found those Jenga blocks in the river

She's coughing rapidly, bits of pebbles, river grass, and murky water coming out of her mouth to no end. It seems like she doesn't know what's happening, and keeps coughing, and crying. The blue, honey-like liquid streaming down her cheeks is beautiful color, the color of her eyes when she opens them. Her hair is soggy and matted, from a mix of the river water and the purple substance, still leaking from the back of her skull.

She's sobbing now.

The coughs are getting louder, harsher, causing more purple to spurt from her head, resulting in louder sobs, and faster tears. The endless sobbing keeps her from breathing right when the tears pool in her open, screaming mouth. And so she keeps coughing.

It's an endless cycle of pain, fear, and sadness.

End it?

End the cycle? If so, yes

By that I mean talk to her.

Don't kill her, dude.

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I'm not gonna kill her, geez

K good bro

i wack her up and see if shes ok then i ask her if she needs eney help

i am a nears after all.


"Huh? What? WAHH!" 

"O-oh, are you a nurse? Can you help me?"

The girl tries to climb down from the rock, but promptly falls off.

"Ow... Oh... My knee hurts.... You wouldn't happen to have an ice pack, or something? Because you are a nurse and all..."