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Its certainly interesting. Nice scenario, interesting beginning, but some weaknesses.
In that I mean:

Some visuals where character details change that shouldnt, like Sierras collar looking different in some pics. Also not really a fan of AI artwork. I understand why people use them and I dont blame small teams or solo devs for it and I know there are LOTS of games in this genre that use them, still a thing thats suboptimal for me.

Also noticed some errors in text. Not about grammer or spelling but there was one line where "Sharon" was still called "Shego", I mean its obviously her but it should stick to one :D Furthermore when texting with your GF after she arrived in Italy she talks about her "amrican SIM card" not working there while the same dialogue states that they are from UK/London. (might be a misunderstanding on my side tho)

Another thing I found a bit uncomfortable was when the game in regards of Luna calls it "trap" content. I know trap is a known porn term thats recognizable, but it feels a bit off, to say the least, to refer to a transfem as a trap. (im not trans myself, but seen posts by trans people who dislike the term)

Anything else, well there is definetly a good foundation for the most characters to expand on, interesting topics and diverse contents to possibly explore. Nice to see a small "branching" this early in the game, in the sense that there are quite a few scenes already that are mutually exclusive.

But its definetly too early to say more about it. Keep it up, I will certainly keep an eye on it. Good Luck

Omega Games156 days ago(+1)

Thank you so much for the in-depth review! 😊

Some of the images you mentioned (like Sierra in the dream sequence and a few of Giulia in the opening) were among the very first scenes I ever created. In versions 0.2 and 0.3 (coming very soon!), I’ve worked hard to improve character consistency from image to image, fixing many of those early visual mismatches. Unfortunately, it would take a lot of time to go back and rework things like Sierra’s collar or Giulia’s earrings in Chapter 1, but it’s definitely something I plan to do when I have the time!

Thanks also for pointing out the text errors: I’ve already gone in and fixed those! 🙏

The question of how to refer to Luna’s content is definitely a tricky one. I’m not part of the LGBTQI+ community myself, but I always stand firmly in support of their rights. Initially, I considered describing Luna simply as MtF (Male to Female), which I know is the most respectful and accurate way to reference her transition. However, many people online are still unfamiliar with that terminology and tend to recognize more widely used, though problematic, terms like "trap" or "sissy" (which also exist as tags on many NSFW sites). I went with a term I thought would be more easily understood by a broader audience, but I really appreciate you bringing this up and giving me a chance to reflect on it more carefully.

Thanks again for playing my game and taking the time to share such thoughtful feedback, it means a lot! :3

games_player156 days ago(+1)

Oh thanks for the nice reply. Glad to hear that you are working on this stuff. Oh and im glad you took it well, I thought it sounded anbit harshly on my Side because the 'negative' parts were so 😅

Also its good to know that you thought about the way to describe her. Thats a lot better than just not thinking about it. Like yes I get it, trap or sissy are established terms for porn categorization, but they bear meaning thats not applicable to a normal trans person. I dont know the best solution for it either though. Its a thing that at the end you need to decide 😅

So yeah good luck, im looking forward to it

Omega Games156 days ago

I really appreciate constructive criticism! I think it’s the only real way we have to improve ourselves :3

That said, for now I think I’ll stick with labeling those scenes as Trap/Sissy, but I’ll be very mindful about highlighting the struggles and challenges that a transgender person faces in today’s society. I’d really love to send a message of hope to people who are going through or planning to go through a transition, within the limits and context of my role as the creator of an NSFW game, of course.

I hope I won’t disappoint your expectations in the next update (which will finally include animations)! 😊

games_player156 days ago(+1)

Sounds promising. Dont worry about *my* expectations, i try not to put up any for Games like this. Just take your time and make sure you are content with it ❤️

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