I brought your game and played it stream, and here are my thoughts:
The Good
-Intro is the best part
The streetlight mechanics, I really liked that!
- The environment is beautiful
From the cold outdoor to the old lady's house, all of it beautiful in an unsettling way
- How you left document and made them to the point
The Bad
- The game mechanics when you have to get out of the house, is HORRIBLE!! Its you running in circle! Its doesn't work sometimes! That ruins the whole experience! PLEASE FIX IT!
Its take courage to put your work out into the world, PLEASE KEEP MAKING GAMES, YOU ARE GOING TO IMPROVE WITH EACH REP!!