Hey DroptineArt loving the story so far! Just wanted to point out a bug in the dialogue when Cooper is heading to the BBQ, and is taking pictures of the Old Fox's Barn.
The dialogue/roles get swapped so Cooper is saying the Old Fox's lines, and Old Fox is saying Coopers lines right after Cooper says "Company? No. No, just for me. It's a nice barn, and the sky's so pretty I thought it'd make a nice picture." right after that, Old Fox says "..." followed by what should have been Old Fox, but comes up as Cooper: "Aw, hell. I'm sorry, boy. I thought you was with them Dollar-Duz-It folks."
It continues reversed up until the line "My wife'n I like t' sit'n have our morning coffee..." which is back to being correctly labelled as coming from "Old Fox"